The pose, the wings, the skimming feet all add to the shot. I wish I had more of the reflection or less of it, but the partial reflection just draws my eye in an unsatisfying way. The whites are blown in a couple areas on my screen and that could be something you might try to fix if the raw has anything to recover.
If there is no more reflection I would crop more of it away and crop a little of the water on the right. There is enough there to get the idea of leaving room for a water landing, but it the water is not that interesting with textures or ripples. You might experiment with maybe a 4:3 aspect ratio.
Would be a good submission I think.