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The answer is No don't touch the stump.I just back from south texas and had some remarkable success with the Z9. Pre-capture is wonderful and would be that much better if it worked at 20 FPS in raw.
The following image is downsized, no post.
On question . Should I have included the bottom of the stump?
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Yes keep it as it is.
except Lower left, Remove the bright green leaf, or reduce the brightness on the green leaf it attracts the eye to much.
To have some of the stump bottom taken of will seem like the image is chopped compressed, alters the position of the bird in the frame, at the moment the stump anchors the image, the shadows of the wings on the stump connects with the bird.
This composition is great, its shows the environment that completes a story, it has a direction, it has negative space reinforcing direction travel speed, the wing tips show slight movement yet the head and chest appear clear.
I cant tell sharpness as my screen on the office PC, the image file is not revealing detail well, should look at it on my Mac LOL.
The background is soft and with a nice pale green colour that is not competing with the key subject.
The blue and red creat s dimesion, with slight editing can be enhanced.
The image has a story, evokes emotion, has a nice wow factor.
Its cohesive, not esoteric,
The stump with the blue floral arrangement is pivotal and compliments the image greatly, the red green and blue colours all work nicely, lovely image, the bird wasn't red it would be a different situation.
i would experiment not with te stump but maybe see how a fraction of the top and right side works or doesn't work
I this was a competition i was judging then i would give you a credit/merit. LOL
PS flip the image and see if it enhances the power.